My bird shape poem

I was making a shape poem which is my first Summer learning journey post It might be hard to read so I put a video too

It was all really easy But easiest was the video and it was fun

The challenging was making the shape of the bird I had to make quick and turn really quick I also choose pen paper to make it so I could challenge myself

I enjoyed making the video the most

Next time I will make it bigger and I can add more detail

2 thoughts on “My bird shape poem

  1. Kia ora Abhishek,

    My name is Theresa and I am one of the Summer Learning Journal commenters.

    Wow! I really like this post for many reasons. Firstly your drawing is spot on. A very beautiful bird. At first glance I wondered how I would manage reading this but as I scrolled down I saw that you had taken this into account and had made a video. Props for doing this year are clearly reflecting on your work and making adjustments as you go. Ka pai.

    As for the poem itself, what a wonderful idea to show the spectrum of birds being annoying as well as a sign of peace. I really loved your word selection and how you talked about many different characteristics of birds.

    Keep up your amazing work 🙂

    Ngā mihi

  2. Morena Abhishek,
    Jamie here from Saint Patrick’s School Auckland. I like your bird shape poem, it’s very creative. Next time you could add some colour or make the words bigger because I can’t really see them.
    Have a good day from Jamie

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